Feedback on the sketches

I had a class with David, where we showcased our work and what we had made till now.

My feedback was that my topic, the content of the carousel book was not convincing enough. While my work on exploring the book structures itself was interesting, the content of the book and the topic of covid felt last minute and tacked on.

He suggested that I look a little deeper and see what else I could do. My work felt more like a love letter to books and how much I love them, and perhaps that could be my focus.