Finally, I started to work on the last spread, and make the changes I had decided on after the last feedback session. I decided to switch to a black colour for the body text, and red for the handwritten text on most pages.
Page 10 & 11
I changed the layout of the text to try and give it better balance.
Page 12 & 13
Here to, I started with the first one, but I didn't like how the text sat on it so I asked a few other people. A friend of mine who is a comic book artist told me people don't usually read the text in the lower-left corner, so I switched the lines.
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I tried working on this page, using keywords from the paragraphs left for the visuals, but I didn't like any of these much.
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